I kept mine to one page, explaining times wed seen each other, we are staying with his parents, where wed be living after we got married, I mentioned I had a son who was not traveling with me at this time, when my divorce would be final, I also put something about looking forward to starting our new life together, so hopefully that covered it..Im sure I put more in there I cant remember now.
I did a list that went on top of everything else, in a pronged portfolio so it wasnt falling all over, kept it in order of the list, and the passports in the pockets since theres no where else to put them

Hopefully that makes it easier on them.
Thanks everyone, its been sent off and now the wait begins!!