Hey everyone, just wondering if ya'll would take a look at this employer letter for our application and see if you have any suggestions for edits? My husband added in some info re: when and how the initial discrepancies were adjusted. Thanks

This letter is to confirm that XX is currently employed at XX LTD. XX began his contract on May 1st, 2016. XX is a permanent,
non-salaried employee. He receives a rate of pay of ₤9.50 an hour, which equates to a minimum ₤19,760 gross pay per year, not accounting for overtime which is very common during the busy summer and holiday seasons.
I have been made aware that minor discrepancies between payslips and bank deposits played a role in XX and XX’s initial application for settlement being refused. In my capacity as the XX, and the employer of XX, I am writing to you to confirm that all of the Payslips issued to XX are correct and that there were legitimate reasons for there being some discrepancies between the amounts shown on some of the Payslips and the amounts paid into his Bank Account in September and November 2017. All of the Payslips are valid and all were received by XX and the discrepancies which came to light subsequently were caused by:
September 2017 (+£0.01) rounding differences on a spreadsheet produced by my Accountants when processing the Payroll on my behalf and from which payments were made at the time (payments are now made from a Sage Report provided by the Accountants) and,
November 2017 (-£14.65) some initial errors in calculating payments following the introduction of the Company’s Workplace Pension Scheme.
The initial error was in the payment on the 5th of August where XX was overpaid by £14.64 from a spreadsheet sent by my accountants which contained the calculating error. His pay on the 5th August should have been £1668.26, however the amount transferred based on the spreadsheet was £1682.90. Shortly after I had transferred the payments to my employees accounts the error was corrected and accurate payslips were produced. The difference in X' pay on the 5th of November was the reconciliation of the small differences for both August and September between the amounts transferred and the Net payments as detailed in the payslips.
I am also able to confirm that when the discrepancies were identified, subsequent payments to X were adjusted to ensure that he has received exactly the amounts due to him as determined by his Payslips.I genuinely hope this explanation is sufficient in explaining these minor errors.
I would also like to confirm that X did not receive a payslip for February 2018. I gave X 6 weeks holiday after his wedding to X so they could travel to America and submit X’s application for a spouse visa and so X could meet X’s family.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions.
Sincerely,